What do you think about my narrative writing!!!!!!! rate/comment 1-10 scale?

Revoking that horrifying day. It all started on June MMVI. An ordinary day listening to music. Mother and father were preparing breakfast the traditional Mexican molletes bread topping with cheese, fried beans, dice tomatoes,onions, and butter. While they were preparing the food father suggested go horse around with some friends. Mother said no because the [...]

what do you think of my narrative writing?

Revoking that horrifying day. It all started on June MMVI. An ordinary day listening to music. Mother and father were preparing breakfast the traditional Mexican molletes bread topping with cheese, fried beans, dice tomatoes,onions, and butter. While they were preparing the food father suggested go horse around with some friends. Mother said no because the [...]

Should I become a writer when i grow up? What do you think of my writing?

Her eyes quickly flitted to her antique wristwatch, the time had shown 6:42p.m. Nearing sunset… Something grabbed hold in her stomach as she inhaled the sweet October’s day. The leaves were falling in groups, landing ever so perfectly onto the ground. It was this day, of many days that she felt above the rest. Not [...]

Please Check This Writing Out And Critique? Thanks!?

Hey guys! Ok, so I was bored and decided to just scribble down some thoughts and ideas i had in my mind. Well, this is what I came up with. After re-reading it, I think it actually sounds kinda cool and I think i might continue with this story. I just wanna know what you [...]

What you think of my writing rough draft?

The darkness was too deep, the silence was too dead. The lights flickered as if winking at him, the subliminal whispering goodbye to him. Also goodnight because, soon, they were to be dead – along with the still night. Cheap hugging b… ! Stupid tree-hugging losers who want him to save the world. Lights – [...]

How can i improve my writing?

The darkness was too deep, the silence was too dead. The lights flickered as if winking at him, the subliminal whispering goodbye to him. Also goodnight because, soon, they were to be dead – along with the still night. Cheap hugging b… ! Stupid tree-hugging losers who want him to save the world. Lights – [...]

How could I improve m writing?

The darkness was too deep, the silence was too dead. The lights flickered as if winking at him, the subliminal whispering goodbye to him. Also goodnight because, soon, they were to be dead – along with the still night. Cheap hugging b… ! Stupid tree-hugging losers who want him to save the world. Lights – [...]

How could I prove my writing? I already have a good plot?

The darkness was too deep, the silence was too dead. The lights flickered as if winking at him, the subliminal whispering goodbye to him. Also goodnight because, soon, they were to be dead – along with the still night. Cheap hugging b… ! Stupid tree-hugging losers who want him to save the world. Lights – [...]

Please help check my short English writing. English learner seeks help?

I am an english learner, this is a diary I wrote, Please don’t be reluctant to give some suggestions, which sentences should I revise and how should I revise them? diary: It was a usual day, by date it was the Thanks-giving day in the West. I was swamped with my arduous work; my mind [...]

Need a writing critique?

I’m a teen writer and I just wrote this story for a contest but I just found out I missed the deadline. Now I don’t think this is a very good story but I’d like to see your opinions on this. “Captured from the Salazin Highlands, ladies and gentlemen I bring you a young and [...]

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