Is this a good lyric poem and how could i end it?
March 10, 2011 by
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i have to write a bunch of different poems for my english class and i’m not sure what kind of poem this is. i think it’s a lyric poem, but anyways i also can’t think of how to end it so pleasee help!! Summer Vacation Beach waves hitting the smooth hot sand While I sit [...]
what do you think of this poem?
February 28, 2011 by
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i wrote it when i was twelve in the summer i found it in my attic the other day… Wind in my hair, up and down hills, pedaling faster and faster, Friends by my side, one until five, As we brisk the day away, The sweet scent of smoke, from a street barbeque comes at [...]
HOW TO END THIS???????????????
February 22, 2011 by
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First it was the two-story brick house on the dirt road, calm and peaceful. Next it was a three-story house based on concrete with a little fenced yard in the back. Now it’s just a lime green house with two main floors, based on concrete like the last house. It’s a large house, but a [...]
can anybody name this song?
February 20, 2011 by
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Three little birds, sat on my window. And they told me I don’t need to worry. summer came like cinnamon so sweet little girls double-dutch on the concrete
What is theme of this poem?
February 18, 2011 by
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The Concrete River by Luis J. Rodríguez We sink into the dust, Baba and me, Beneath brush of prickly leaves; Ivy strangling trees–singing Our last rites of locura. Homeboys. Worshipping God-fumes Out of spray cans. Our backs press up against A corrugated steel fence Along the dried banks Of a concrete river. Spray-painted outpourings On [...]
Please Check This Writing Out And Critique? Thanks!?
February 10, 2011 by
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Hey guys! Ok, so I was bored and decided to just scribble down some thoughts and ideas i had in my mind. Well, this is what I came up with. After re-reading it, I think it actually sounds kinda cool and I think i might continue with this story. I just wanna know what you [...]
How’s This For An Idea? Does It Read Ok?
February 7, 2011 by
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Hey guys! Ok, so I was bored and decided to just scribble down some thoughts and ideas i had in my mind. Well, this is what I came up with. After re-reading it, I think it actually sounds kinda cool and I think i might continue with this story. I just wanna know what you [...]
What is this song?! Omg!!?
January 27, 2011 by
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It goes: 3 little birds sat on my window. And they told me I don’t need to worry. Summer came like cinnamon, so sweet. Little girls double dutch on the concrete.
Can you tell me the name of this song and who sings it?
January 17, 2011 by
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i know some words to it, but not that many. “he said it’s concrete and stone this old skin is just a bag of bones” “we have something more than them” “i lost my mother when i was much younger to a big cat with big paws and big claws” “birds fly birds fly two [...]
What song is this?????
January 16, 2011 by
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What song has these lyrics? Three little birds, sat on my window. And they told me I don’t need to worry. Summer came like cinnamon So sweet, Little girls double-dutch on the concrete. Maybe sometimes, we’ve got it wrong, but it’s alright The more things seem to change, the more they stay the same Oh, [...]