Should I become a writer when i grow up? What do you think of my writing?

Her eyes quickly flitted to her antique wristwatch, the time had shown 6:42p.m. Nearing sunset… Something grabbed hold in her stomach as she inhaled the sweet October’s day. The leaves were falling in groups, landing ever so perfectly onto the ground. It was this day, of many days that she felt above the rest. Not [...]

Do you think my story is good?

I wrote this story for a school project. It is the story of a dog. I am 13 years old right now but I was 12 when I wrote it. Please, if you have hateful comments, keep them to yourself. The name of this story is “Confined” I believe anyone can say that they would [...]

what do you think of this poem?

i wrote it when i was twelve in the summer i found it in my attic the other day… Wind in my hair, up and down hills, pedaling faster and faster, Friends by my side, one until five, As we brisk the day away, The sweet scent of smoke, from a street barbeque comes at [...]

What you think of my writing rough draft?

The darkness was too deep, the silence was too dead. The lights flickered as if winking at him, the subliminal whispering goodbye to him. Also goodnight because, soon, they were to be dead – along with the still night. Cheap hugging b… ! Stupid tree-hugging losers who want him to save the world. Lights – [...]

What do you think about this exerpt from this short novel i wrote called heartbreak?

Sitting in a room, faced down suffocating from the darkness that lingers inside, viciously taunting my misery. i contemplate hoping that one day light will show its glowing face again. shivering from the coldness of being betrayed by the one i gave my heart to. The one who was suppose to be the my one [...]

Do you think I could be a famous writer? I always wanted to write a book?

The darkness was too deep, the silence was too dead. The lights flickered as if winking at him, the subliminal whispering goodbye to him. Also goodnight because, soon, they were to be dead – along with the still night. Cheap hugging b… ! Stupid tree-hugging losers who want him to save the world. Lights – [...]

You think I am a good writer?

The darkness was too deep, the silence was too dead. The lights flickered as if winking at him, the subliminal whispering goodbye to him. Also goodnight because, soon, they were to be dead – along with the still night. Cheap hugging b… ! Stupid tree-hugging losers who want him to save the world. Lights – [...]

**Please Rate My Rap Lyrics! Thanks** Tell Me what ya think!?

Comin straight off tha head. Didnt even go over it really. Criticize: Bad or Good. Tell Me tha Truth My rhymes keep spillin out of tha dome like a jar no lid. Dont try me man, cuz we rush you kid. Flow keep comin like im spittin tha heat, Mouth on fiya cuz im rippin [...]

I want to give this poem to my friend, I wrote it, what do you think?

My Garden The stone is cracked, water no longer flows from the once intricate fountain The fresh chromatic hyacinths and roses are withered and died Soil cracks with each foot step It has become a place without the relief of water The only thing thriving are the hedges, seemingly dead yet growing, enclosing me in [...]

WhAt Do YoU tHiNk Of ThIs SoNg I wRoTe….Do you agree with it?

So tell me what you think, I realize it’s a day late =)…star if ya like An Inconvenient Truth Well I don’t like to litter, but I’m not gonna clean up the mess they made Dern right I’m bitter, farmers can’t even afford to sell their hay And the crops don’t grow ‘cause the air’s [...]

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