Is this a good start for a story?? Easy ten points, just tell me what you think!?

I have to turn in a short story to a writer. Is this a good piece? Please, any critism is greatly appreciated. The twigs snapped against my heels. The wind howled and Janie turned against it, in defeat. “I wanna go home.” Her lips turned in a quivering scowl, but her words blew away with [...]

Tell me what you think of the Preface for my story!?

I was prowling the dark streets of Compton, CA when I first spotted him. He was standing with his back to me, his head tilted to the sky.. what was he looking at? I looked up at the exact moment an earsplitting caw ripped through the quiet darkness. There, flying above, we’re a dozen huge [...]

Can somebody tell me which one of the followings are emements compounds or mixtures?

i got some science homework and im really confused can you tell me if the following are compounds mixtures or elements? 10 points!! water sevenbean soup baking soda birds nest baking powder ocean water aluminum starch paint gasoline sugar detergent ink phosphorus air muddy water powdered drink milk calcium concrete blood cake mix iced tea [...]

Tell me are these good poems?

Re post: didnt get many answers and have added more: REMEMBER NOT ALL POEMS HAVE TO RHYME: THIS IS A LIMERICK A monkey was having a fit For his friend thew a banana in a pit He dicided to took For more food in a book And all he found was a zit! THIS IS [...]

Can you tell me the name of this song and who sings it?

i know some words to it, but not that many. “he said it’s concrete and stone this old skin is just a bag of bones” “we have something more than them” “i lost my mother when i was much younger to a big cat with big paws and big claws” “birds fly birds fly two [...]

Please, tell me your honest opionion.?

I have to do a poetry scrapbook. What do you think of them? The theme is WISHES. HAIKU- I wish I could fly be a beautiful bird high up in the sky DIAMONTE- magic creative, imagianation dreaming, believing, seeing every child needs it playing, flying, saving invisable, entairtainment wishes CINQUAIN I wish dream, create wishing,singing, [...]

**Please Rate My Rap Lyrics! Thanks** Tell Me what ya think!?

Comin straight off tha head. Didnt even go over it really. Criticize: Bad or Good. Tell Me tha Truth My rhymes keep spillin out of tha dome like a jar no lid. Dont try me man, cuz we rush you kid. Flow keep comin like im spittin tha heat, Mouth on fiya cuz im rippin [...]

Can anyone tell me what kind of bird this is?

A buddy and I were at Great Falls National Park last week and took a bunch of pictures, one of which is this bird in mid-flight. I looked around on the internet to try and find out what it was but I can’t get anything concrete. I was thinking maybe a turkey vulture or black [...]