Is this short story structurally sound?

Life has only just begun, white lace and promises. So many roads to choose, he started out walking and than learned to run. When the evening comes, he smiles, so much of life to live. Joseph Driscle is a protected child, his mother Kathy loves him dearly and will do anything to keep him out [...]

Any plot ideas? I am attempting to write a short story, and I am stuck.?

I beamed as Curt and I walked through Central Park on that beautiful Sunday afternoon, families parked on the grass, the sun rays beaming down through the leaves onto my unnaturally pale skin, the song birds serenading us with their always joyful tunes, but little did I know, this would be the last day, I [...]

can someone proofread my short essay for college?

I’m not fluent in English cause i moved here about 3 years ago. “There is a quaker saying: “let your life speak.” Describe the environment in which you were raised- your family, home neighborhood or community- and how it influenced the person you are today.” As a child of motivated go-getters parents who choose to [...]

is this a good start for a short story?

please give feedback, and please be merciless…if it sucks, tell me so i can fix i – i can take it. (The War came suddenly, and ended with complete devastation. The fires ripped across the face of the earth with no regard for what they ravaged. Nations fell, one after the other, until none were [...]

What do you think about this exerpt from this short novel i wrote called heartbreak?

Sitting in a room, faced down suffocating from the darkness that lingers inside, viciously taunting my misery. i contemplate hoping that one day light will show its glowing face again. shivering from the coldness of being betrayed by the one i gave my heart to. The one who was suppose to be the my one [...]

Please help check my short English writing. English learner seeks help?

I am an english learner, this is a diary I wrote, Please don’t be reluctant to give some suggestions, which sentences should I revise and how should I revise them? diary: It was a usual day, by date it was the Thanks-giving day in the West. I was swamped with my arduous work; my mind [...]

English Assignment: Writing a short story about nature?

Well for 8th Grade English, we went to look at an art piece called ‘Unbearable Lightness’ and its a concrete block with a twig leading up the top, with a tiny bird sitting at the tip. It’s displaying the controversy between the natural world and the industrial world (Bird = natural, concrete = industrial) And [...]