can you review/critique my poem?
July 29, 2010 by
Filed under Concrete Bird Baths
It is supposed to be in modernist style Gray leaf Clinging to the edge of the branch of the trunk it holds Watching its fallen brothers discolored in folds Stem running cold, akin to the crunches below Color running, bleeding, clinging Wind falls rushing down to strain it off, off- off Weak in its open [...]