*!Please Look at my lyrics and Rate, and Criticize!* Thanks?

My rhymes keep spillin out of tha dome like a jar no lid. Dont try me homie, cuz we rush you kid. Flow keep comin like im spittin tha heat, Mouth on fiya cuz im rippin tha beat. Slo down homie, jus take a seat, im stayin in this rap game like concrete. Concrete in [...]

**Rate my Rap Lyrics. Please!** Real Shit!?

My rhymes keep spillin out of tha dome like a jar no lid. Dont try me homie, cuz we rush you kid. Flow keep comin like im spittin tha heat, Mouth on fiya cuz im rippin tha beat. Slo down homie, jus take a seat, im stayin in this rap game like concrete. Concrete in [...]

**Please Rate My Rap Lyrics! Thanks** Tell Me what ya think!?

Comin straight off tha head. Didnt even go over it really. Criticize: Bad or Good. Tell Me tha Truth My rhymes keep spillin out of tha dome like a jar no lid. Dont try me man, cuz we rush you kid. Flow keep comin like im spittin tha heat, Mouth on fiya cuz im rippin [...]

very odd dream please interpret?

okay Sedagon again with another dream this one is very long and needs some points of notice 1.there are anthropomorphic animals but there are few of them and they are normally spread far. 2 this dream had nearly no dialogue but I could still understand what people meant. 3.no hospitals for animals and its set [...]

Please help check my short English writing. English learner seeks help?

I am an english learner, this is a diary I wrote, Please don’t be reluctant to give some suggestions, which sentences should I revise and how should I revise them? diary: It was a usual day, by date it was the Thanks-giving day in the West. I was swamped with my arduous work; my mind [...]

Creative Criticism please?

I know it’s not done, I just need help pinpointing where I’ve gone wrong. In a soaring smoke crescent Complimented by chimney and home A single bird’s tearful lament Drowned out by the Factory drone Burning shards of blood and flame Lines of concrete and steel bar Come crashing down in perfect refrain Our silent [...]

PLEASE HELP baby injured kurrawong?

today i was walking my dog when i found a very young baby bird, i think its a kurrawong, it fell onto concrete out of a nest which was about 15m high it is pretty big but cant fly, when it stands it kind of sways and has its eyes shut and then opens them, [...]

BIRD BATHS !! PLEASE ANSWER.?

I have a bird bath that is not coated. When I put water in it, the bird bath seem to absorb the water. What can I coat or paint it with. Something that won’t hurt the birds. Thank you for your answers. Blessings to you !

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