do you like that poem?? It’s my favorite :D please read it all !!?

A spring evening. A large room in an old house. A woman of a certain age, dressed in black, is speaking to a young man. They have not turned on the lights. Through both windows the moonlight shines relentlessly. I forgot to mention that the Woman in Black has published two or three interesting volume [...]

Do you like my poem? I perfer honesty please?

The darkness is agonizing. The silence is demeaning. And I feel vultures eyes. Looking at me leering. The gasps and moans of the wind, Is the only thing I’m hearing. My footsteps grow quicker now, Walking along the concrete paths. Yet I still feel something following me. Watching me with anger. Glancing with envy. And [...]

Would you please read and give advice?

I saw a tree with birds beside green leaves In groups they take off reaching for clouds But just to land again upon this planet of slobs slaves the to limbs that hold them captive Why is it that once we are free, we’re scared? Once your feet lift from the ground, We grow insecure, [...]

Can I please have some criticism on an excerpt from my novella?

So I’d really appreciate some constructive criticisms on this excerpt. Here goes: December 2nd was a too beautiful day for anyone to die. The sun was shining and birds chirped along the empty road. I could remember it as if it were yesterday, only it was actually about a week ago. I was walking along [...]

Please rate my poem its not tht long x]?

3 Baby Birds* 3 baby birds, gripped on the branch And they told me “sigh and don’t worry.” 4 little girls playing double dutch Jump, skip, jump, skip 6 o’ clock on the concrete Autumns breeze flow into me Grandmas chueys words.. “I don’t believe in tomorrow, yesterday, or today.” Because if today is the [...]

Please Check This Writing Out And Critique? Thanks!?

Hey guys! Ok, so I was bored and decided to just scribble down some thoughts and ideas i had in my mind. Well, this is what I came up with. After re-reading it, I think it actually sounds kinda cool and I think i might continue with this story. I just wanna know what you [...]

Rate my poem please?

Hearts beat with the turning of gears- gears that work clocks /and awaken the world to that bleak hour of day/where the angels fly with wings mended with tape/and Lazarus walks with eyes that reflect the gray of the streets./The colors of the flowers are drowned /by the overwhelming ashen shades of the concrete /that [...]

Please, tell me your honest opionion.?

I have to do a poetry scrapbook. What do you think of them? The theme is WISHES. HAIKU- I wish I could fly be a beautiful bird high up in the sky DIAMONTE- magic creative, imagianation dreaming, believing, seeing every child needs it playing, flying, saving invisable, entairtainment wishes CINQUAIN I wish dream, create wishing,singing, [...]

Please help edit my essay, thanks?

Walls My parents had this philosophy that we are all walls. So they built me a strong foundation to develop on, hard work the cement, and love and care the water. The water that still quenches my thirst for success today. My parents always told me that hard work was one of the building blocks [...]

**Rate my Rap Lyrics. Please!** Real Sh1t!?

My rhymes keep spillin out of tha dome like a jar no lid. Dont try me homie, cuz we rush you kid. Flow keep comin like im spittin tha heat, Mouth on fiya cuz im rippin tha beat. Slo down homie, jus take a seat, im stayin in this rap game like concrete. Concrete in [...]

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