Am I a good writer? I love to write, but I am 13. U can be truthful- i will be okay.?

The wetness of my tongue formed a layer of moisture over my coarse lips. Dark vermillion had been smeared to my arms and legs from various attempts to escape, therefore many whippings dried to my skin like paint on a canvas. I smelled sour of vomit, and my skin was sickening pale yellow. Dark O’s [...]

Does this seriously sound okay?

this is the first part of my story. please read it, its a bit long. * The girl couldn’t have been older than 14. Her hair was tied in a single, dark ponytail, the pink scrunchie matching her lip gloss. Her powder blue school uniform was in almost perfect condition, knee socks the same height, [...]

Is it okay to give your bird a bath?

Is it okay to give birds baths? its because I’m afraid to give mine a bath because I’m scared if he gets sick. but it is very hot and he’s all hot =( is it okay?