Is this a good start for a story?? Easy ten points, just tell me what you think!?

I have to turn in a short story to a writer. Is this a good piece? Please, any critism is greatly appreciated. The twigs snapped against my heels. The wind howled and Janie turned against it, in defeat. “I wanna go home.” Her lips turned in a quivering scowl, but her words blew away with [...]

Tell me are these good poems?

Re post: didnt get many answers and have added more: REMEMBER NOT ALL POEMS HAVE TO RHYME: THIS IS A LIMERICK A monkey was having a fit For his friend thew a banana in a pit He dicided to took For more food in a book And all he found was a zit! THIS IS [...]

Is this a good lyric poem and how could i end it?

i have to write a bunch of different poems for my english class and i’m not sure what kind of poem this is. i think it’s a lyric poem, but anyways i also can’t think of how to end it so pleasee help!! Summer Vacation Beach waves hitting the smooth hot sand While I sit [...]

Do you think my story is good?

I wrote this story for a school project. It is the story of a dog. I am 13 years old right now but I was 12 when I wrote it. Please, if you have hateful comments, keep them to yourself. The name of this story is “Confined” I believe anyone can say that they would [...]

Is my poem any good rate it!?

3 Baby Birds* 3 baby birds, gripped on the branch And they told me “sigh and don’t worry.” 4 little girls playing double dutch Jump, skip, jump, skip 6 o’ clock on the concrete Autumns breeze flow into me Grandmas chueys words.. “I don’t believe in tomorrow, yesterday, or today.” Because if today is the [...]

Am I a good writer? I love to write, but I am 13. U can be truthful- i will be okay.?

The wetness of my tongue formed a layer of moisture over my coarse lips. Dark vermillion had been smeared to my arms and legs from various attempts to escape, therefore many whippings dried to my skin like paint on a canvas. I smelled sour of vomit, and my skin was sickening pale yellow. Dark O’s [...]

is this a good start for a short story?

please give feedback, and please be merciless…if it sucks, tell me so i can fix i – i can take it. (The War came suddenly, and ended with complete devastation. The fires ripped across the face of the earth with no regard for what they ravaged. Nations fell, one after the other, until none were [...]

Is this a good story??? based on mytholgy?

It was a dark night when ember was watching her favorite TV show. All the sudden the lights go off and she heres a humming song as bright as a bird. The lights slowly blink back on Ember mutters im okay. Ember is 15. She was adopted ,her parents left her with a note that [...]

How could I prove my writing? I already have a good plot?

The darkness was too deep, the silence was too dead. The lights flickered as if winking at him, the subliminal whispering goodbye to him. Also goodnight because, soon, they were to be dead – along with the still night. Cheap hugging b… ! Stupid tree-hugging losers who want him to save the world. Lights – [...]

You think I am a good writer?

The darkness was too deep, the silence was too dead. The lights flickered as if winking at him, the subliminal whispering goodbye to him. Also goodnight because, soon, they were to be dead – along with the still night. Cheap hugging b… ! Stupid tree-hugging losers who want him to save the world. Lights – [...]

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