English help plz?
February 26, 2011 by
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What r some similaritie between “The Wind” by Jame Stephens and “the Wind tapped like a tired man” by emily dickinson besides them using concrete images, giving the wind fingers and personifing the wind as a man. Emily Dickinson The Wind-tapped like a tired Man- And like a Host-”Come in” I boldly answered-entered then My [...]
9th grade english question?
February 21, 2011 by
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Will you please read these three paragraphs and tell me if they portray exactly what I’m trying to say? Suggestions for improvements are welcome!! Himmel Street Irregular bursts of frosty wind shock the trees as the sopping sky pours on the splintered rooftops. Murky clouds paint the all the peeling houses a shadowy gray. Old [...]
can you help me with my english homework?? here are the questions?
December 6, 2010 by
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paragraph a- we saw a bird. he was above us. he moved his feathers. he flew to a limb. he turned his head. he flew down again and again. he made noise to warn the jungle. he saw men and a boat. paragraph b-high overhead, a white cockatoo glided up onto a grider-like limb of [...]
Please help check my short English writing. English learner seeks help?
September 8, 2010 by
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I am an english learner, this is a diary I wrote, Please don’t be reluctant to give some suggestions, which sentences should I revise and how should I revise them? diary: It was a usual day, by date it was the Thanks-giving day in the West. I was swamped with my arduous work; my mind [...]
English Assignment: Writing a short story about nature?
July 15, 2010 by
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Well for 8th Grade English, we went to look at an art piece called ‘Unbearable Lightness’ and its a concrete block with a twig leading up the top, with a tiny bird sitting at the tip. It’s displaying the controversy between the natural world and the industrial world (Bird = natural, concrete = industrial) And [...]