Read And Critique? Thanks Guys!?

Hey guys! Ok, so I was bored and decided to just scribble down some thoughts and ideas i had in my mind. Well, this is what I came up with. After re-reading it, I think it actually sounds kinda cool and I think i might continue with this story. I just wanna know what you [...]

Please Check This Writing Out And Critique? Thanks!?

Hey guys! Ok, so I was bored and decided to just scribble down some thoughts and ideas i had in my mind. Well, this is what I came up with. After re-reading it, I think it actually sounds kinda cool and I think i might continue with this story. I just wanna know what you [...]

How does this sound? Any critique?

This is my story i’m writing. i won’t tell you much of the plot, seeing as this is the opening couple of pages. btw, its set in a fantasy version of japan, hence the names. i’ll leave you to speculate on the events… The girl couldn’t have been older than 14. Her hair was tied [...]

Need a writing critique?

I’m a teen writer and I just wrote this story for a contest but I just found out I missed the deadline. Now I don’t think this is a very good story but I’d like to see your opinions on this. “Captured from the Salazin Highlands, ladies and gentlemen I bring you a young and [...]