*****Any Improvements?My soon to be published book?

Okay so little house got my manuscript and told me they would love to publish my novel. I have to pay 500$ to get it edited but i dont have that kind of money. So heres a sneek peek of my new novel Ele-Mental.My book is about a kid Who finds out he has Element [...]

Do you like this book?

I’m a 12 year old writer… here is a piece of a book I’m writing… what do you think? What can I change? It’s the beginning only… forgive any spelling mistakes. Chapter 1 “The opposite of war isn’t peace, it’s creation.” I To my nightmares I must recurr, Behind the curtain I musn’t look, Beyond [...]

Do you think I could be a famous writer? I always wanted to write a book?

The darkness was too deep, the silence was too dead. The lights flickered as if winking at him, the subliminal whispering goodbye to him. Also goodnight because, soon, they were to be dead – along with the still night. Cheap hugging b… ! Stupid tree-hugging losers who want him to save the world. Lights – [...]

Name 5 similes in the book “Homeless bird”?

So Unforunatly I have to find 5 Similes in the book Homelessbird I cant find any! It would be very helpful if anyone could name 5 similes in that book Hopefully some of you read it? Similes : imagistic comparison of a literal idea or image (referent) with a figurative concrete image (vehicle) using “like” [...]

I am writing a book. Do you like the 1st chapter?

Chapter 1 Virgina and Sarah Roldex I am Virgina Roldex. And this is my story. I live in Hollywood California! Some people think that where I live is so cool cause its where all the celebs are. To tell you the truth, they don’t talk to you and you don’t see them walking down the [...]